Score: 4

"Most unpleased"

submission: Dragon Boy

date: November 7, 2009

You have a Sevier flaw that has annoyed me. When I exited of course it saved because its automatic. I have done this about twice, on the second time I came back into the game naked no equipment no money but my dragon was still all the way grown and the spells was still learned by that one useless idiot.

Score: 3

"The grey , clouds this odd picture of a story."

submission: Ag-ep.1-"to Burn A Soul"

date: September 3, 2009

Me be the all powerful one of wierd cliffs you know. Ye told me of this flash. Quite considerably it could use alot of smoothing in the look, the movement is , well, fine. The concept wasn't very well conceived , but avid in conveying i suppose. Even though this is one of your beggining works. Use alot of effort into making somthing as perfect as you can , And it doesn't really matter how long as long as you do put a ton of effort. This hopefullly with sharpen your skills. I am a harsh judge

Score: 7

"Well done could be better,heres how."

submission: Dreamgate Escape

date: March 19, 2009

I liked many of the ambient ways you created the scary atmosphere. But here is the major thing you got wrong' Presence, and presentation of what was going to kill you. True making it that odd kind of obvous makes anticipation build and thus more scary. However the creatures them selvs were not drawn to look very scary no dark shading ect on them. How they presented them selvs was very quick and no little hints that told you it was pretty much inevedable that they were going to show up. Furthermore when they finally did it pretty much didnt tell you that somthing was wrong or about to happen that was bad' the only deamon**im guessing this is what they were**, that actually had that presence was the first one to be noticed imiedatly the Apprent do not read one. What would have even made him even better was to change the ambience a tad bit short of his apprence like maybe the lights of the room actually brightning Revieling the intire message. then its a Oh shi moment from there . The other thing that could have made it better is not nessacarly less obvous puzzles but more challenging' try to keep the obvousness of them in someway , so it doesnt slow down the pogression of the intire thing. you had it on the money to how fast things were to pogress just not alot of things to pogress with allowing for fast paced suspense compared to a well, zombie pased experience. Over all great and if you managed to read all this then thank ye and you diserve a cookie' to bad i dont have any :( . rating is a 7 out of 10. ps im a harsh critic even though i dont vote much

Score: 9

"Lmao"

submission: "Bugged"

date: March 19, 2009

dude you got some talent there' , i really thought that alien thing was funny for some unkown reason. i guess its how it transformed and what it turned into. Good setup for the main character" a grumpy man who seemed much like a orgre;; crushing bugs in his path ect. Though would have enjoyed to see a Wtf look on his face when he saw the alien. I was kinda expecting that look' it would have been pricless. aw well better luck next time

Score: 10

"Very great , is it wrong that i found it funny?"

submission: The Final Act

date: February 28, 2009

The animation was spot on. Expressions everything fit that of a perfessional mime, safe for the fact that he was joyess,''which i guess is why i saw it as funny''. smooth animation and near the end realisation of what he was doing did one great shock factor to any audience. overall greatness.

Score: 7

"great. could be greater"

submission: Mario-Combat

date: November 28, 2008

Great Incomplete game. I would have liked to see colision damage detection when you smak them around and they hit the walls. Diffrence in button attacks between Light hits Medium and heavy hits. Power's like those shown in the movie. And more forecful moves that can be linked to other moves with a bit of skill but not overly; god skill, however still having some of those combos would still be cool to

Score: 5

"Good try but."

submission: Guns of the Awesome

date: November 25, 2008

Well your joke are good. your EXICUTION of the jokes is lame very slow timming. its like here is this..... then this. dont seem funny if you had it timed just a tad bit better well it would improve the overall presentation. you may not be a egoraptor but you do have the potental of him , try creating your own style though.

Score: 8

"Very well done. however"

submission: Gears of Awesome

date: November 22, 2008

Your work is always great. though ive noticed your using one thing in particular constantly,not that its a bad thing but it gets a bit old. like with Alsome under the knife he jumps into the bomb and goes into some fantesy land. in this one he goes into a coal train and goes into some random fantasy land. as great as random fantasy lands are it suited under the knife, not gears of war. The randomish violence with chainsaws was too funny and suited it well. as usual the sound quality , video quality and exicution was top notch for the alsome style. just keep up the good work and try not to fall into predictable randomness as that can get boring k

Score: 1

"Fission Mailed"

submission: i grow carrots in my yard

date: November 16, 2008

uh lo he's a genious . sierously . because he wants the hate and you all freely give it to him. i would say good job but thats not what your going for. i say instead you fail sir :P

Score: 2

"i belive this is the vioce that most have"

submission: Stinky Bean 2

date: November 16, 2008

The story was to hell my gawd. X_X the sound was anoying a constant squeek makes not a good game ,and well sierously stick to shooters there you can at least make a decent playable game. other then that very challenging and somehwat fun but slow pased if you turn down your speakers to where you cant here the squeek